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Cartoon scene: A Chinese boy (red shirt, black hair) and a foreign girl (blue dress, curly hair) stand at a colorful festival entrance.
Boy: "Welcome to Dragon Boat Racing! It's a very fun Chinese sport!" (pointing around)
Girl: "Wow! So many colors! What is...dragon boat?" (excited, but confused)
Correction: Original: "It very fun Chinese sport!" → Corrected to: "It's a very fun Chinese sport!" (added missing verb and article)
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They stand by a dragon boat with a big dragon head and tail.
Boy: "See! The boat has a dragon head for good luck! The tail goes whoosh in the water!" (makes swooshing motion)
Girl: "A real dragon? Scary...but cool!" (touches the boat carefully)
Correction: Original: "Tail go whoosh in water!" → Corrected to: "The tail goes whoosh in the water!" (added articles and corrected verb)
Cultural note: The dragon head is called the "prow" and tail the "stern" in boat terminology.
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Teams are tying ropes and holding paddles.
Boy: "They work together! Strong ropes and ready paddles—nothing breaks!" (flexes arms)
Girl: "Teamwork like...my soccer team?" (thinking face)
Correction: Original: "Ropes strong, paddles ready—no break!" → Corrected to complete sentence structure
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Sunset by the river, boats in background.
Girl: "Thank you! Dragon boats are magical! I'll tell my friends!" (hugs boy)
Boy: "Chinese culture is fun, right? Bye-bye!" (waves)
Correction: Original: "Dragon boats are...magic!" → Corrected to more natural adjective form
Consider adding a cultural reference: "We race to remember Qu Yuan, an ancient poet!"